Dear reader ,
I chose my POG 2 because I feel opinoins are important and mine is too. I would like for you to look at my opening and first pargraph. I feel my opening has a topic sentence , hook , listes alll three key points. I chose for you to look a my first paragraph because I feel I have a transition and details and examples of the iDeal society. Also I followed all directions for what to include.
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I think that your intro paragraph has all of those things listed.
I like that you leave the reader on a need to know bases. You tell them a little but make them want to read your essay.
I like this gurl its real good
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